Imagine a world with just you and me,
Lying together, in the shade of that tree.
Our minds, thinking together as one,
Visioning our future, and how we’d have fun.
Every day, as long as you live,
You, I promise, will never cry.
One day, I’m sure, that you will see,
U will be happy, if you are with me.
Please, just give me one chance,
Look at me; give me more than a glance.
Every time I look into your eyes,
A fire in my heart, burns like the sun in the sky.
Save me from all this pain and grief,
Each day I wait for us to turn a new leaf.
Become mine, that’s all I ask,
Eventually you’ll know that it’s a fruitful task.
My love for you will never bend,
I will wait for you until the end.
No matter what price, you make me pay,
Each day I'll continue to love like today.
Awww this is beyond cute :)
ReplyDeletehaha thanks maranda =] i felt like such a loner when I was writing it though :P
ReplyDeleteCan we pretend it is dedicated to a specific person?
ReplyDeleteNice poem, and as Maranda said, beyond cute!
Lol jeff, thanks. And if you want to, you can i guess; just don't think too much =]
ReplyDeleteI`ll be the one for you Jeremy ;)
ReplyDelete^ HAHAHHAHHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHAHA, OH DAVID.
ReplyDeleteThis is REALLYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY cute Jeremy! I wonder who this lovely girl is. ( ;
Haha thanks vanessa =]
ReplyDeleteAnd I never said it was written for a girl.... so it was actually written for you david ;]
Jeremy,
ReplyDeleteVery well done! I'm happy to see you experimenting with different poetic forms and you manage to pull off a really good essay that is both an acrostic AND a rhymed poem--definitely no easy task. Whoever this poem is for is a lucky person indeed to be the recipient of such a lovely piece of writing.
Thanks Ms. Mah! =]
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